Conquer Club

This is my first map so...
well, its based on novalogic's game Tachyon: The fringe. i used the galactic map from the game. im still trying to get permissions but i cannot for the life of me find where to contact them for that.
i have a map ready and everything but im a little weary about posting it w/o permission.
so if you really want to see it i will post it.
its slightly large with 57 territories and 7 continents. all based in space.

It's alright to post it without copyright, you can worry about that later.

Alright here goes

How is this different than any other space map? Does it bring something new? It looks like it could the the Space map rearranged.

Way too many criss crosses for me.

not bad but it really does not offer anything NEW to the game play so far.....There already is a Space map that has a strong developed Game play and style..... You need to incorporate New interesting Ideas .. whether it be Scenario or XML features... Just a different Map is not enough to pull in the Players...... Keep going Don't give up but Try and Surprise Us

ill see what i can do, like i said. its my first map so, any help/tips/ideas would be apreciated