

There are some light yellow areas in the picture, so you may need to throw a drop shadow on that text.

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Kabanellas wrote:ok, I've tested with 888 on the 2 best version:
With it faded out, the text IS legible. I think that it may even go to help your cause, if you nixed the outer-glo on the icons. Make them more like the icons on the legend next to it. Make them stand up in relief. By making the two images on two different focal planes, it will better allow your eyes to focus on the image that you are looking at. Be it the text, or the picture.Kabanellas wrote:thanks Dan
-I would like to keep the picture actually even if in a very faded mode......
porkenbeans wrote:With it faded out, the text IS legible. I think that it may even go to help your cause, if you nixed the outer-glo on the icons. Make them more like the icons on the legend next to it. Make them stand up in relief. By making the two images on two different focal planes, it will better allow your eyes to focus on the image that you are looking at. Be it the text, or the picture.
No, just so that they are the same, as the icons in the next box over. instead of outer glow on dark text, make it the other way around. This will allow your picture to be darker/saturated, while your icons are a lighter shade with a drop shadow. You will have to play with the size and spread to make them look just like the other icons. Nothing drastic or different from what is already on the map.Kabanellas wrote:porkenbeans wrote:With it faded out, the text IS legible. I think that it may even go to help your cause, if you nixed the outer-glo on the icons. Make them more like the icons on the legend next to it. Make them stand up in relief. By making the two images on two different focal planes, it will better allow your eyes to focus on the image that you are looking at. Be it the text, or the picture.
I could lower the glow on the icons... but by relief in them, you mean some kind of bevel?
I don't want to over complicate it.... and really not keen on creating a tri-dimensional feel there.
drunkmonkey wrote:I'm filing a C&A report right now. Its nice because they have a drop-down for "jefjef".
Kabanellas wrote:guys, I really really think that they are working great in this example. Both the legend in the left and the legend in the right.
Kabanellas wrote:Yes Yeti, those are 2 different versions. I'm talking about the one below, which I think is working great:
Industrial Helix wrote:Hopefully this list will give you something concrete to work with Kab:
I think the borders around the Berlin emblem need to be altered so that the emblem fits within the borders... so lose that nub of land on Hessen and move the emblem up.
-Done
Fix Hessen and Saxony so that their borders are clear and the numbers clearly belong to one and the other. I see no reason for that border to be a giant S and the most convenient border, something like a C or even a straightish line would do much better.
-Done. Must say that we were trying to make this borders as close as possible to the historical ones, that's why that giant S. But I do know that we'll need to re-adapt them.
Move Bavaria and its numbers down into that area of open land and alter the border on Baden so the numbers fit within the territory.
-Done
Move Silesia down and a bit to the left and lower the numbers as well to the widest point in the territory.
-Done
Fix Warsaw so that Berlins numbers fit within Berlin.
-Done
East Prussia's numbers could probably fit more above the territory rather than run on into Russia. Move West Prussia's border slightly east so everything fits there.
-Done
Move Krakow's numbers onto Krakow.
-Done
Move the word Paris to beneath its numbers, move the border of Burgundy west and scoot those swords over to where the word Paris used to be. Now fix that pointy nose of Switzerland so its more rounded and houses the numbers better. The Sw., rather that just w, ought to be visible now.
-Done
Provence numbers left and down.
-Done
Aquitaine numbers down.
-Done
Swap word Valencia with the numbers and let the numbers run into the sea. The a in Valencia ought to come up to Catalonia's territory.
-Done
Expand Madrid's border at the expense of Leon so the numbers fit.
-Done
Drop Stockholm's numbers to closer proximity to the word Stockholm. Alter Malmo's border so that the numbers can get off that color. Perhaps you can straighten the word Malmo as well.
-Done
Move DK up to the numbers.
-Done
Lower OL's numbers. I'd prefer you changed the border here as well to house things better but can live without.
-Done. Rearranged inner borders.
Change the London/sussex border so that it goes between the sets of numbers.
-Done
Malta and its numbers need to be a bit more compact and not overlap attack lines.
-Can't do it here... I jut don't have any more room. But I don't see any big problem there.
Can you change the naval battle icons? Or at least shrink them? Boulogne is the worst offender, perhaps unacceptably so, and Trafalgar is in a close second.
-Sent Boulogne to a lower layer. Moved Trafalgar up a bit.
You are inconsistent in the relationship between sea battles and the names describing them. I think they ought to all wrap around the top like the ones int he North Sea.
-Can't wrap in every one. Honestly I'm happy the way they are now.
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