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MrBenn wrote:Actually, I quite like the brick work in the title. Sure .44 made it too heavy, but the effect could work if it was toned down and blended in a bit more?
OK here's V28, with subtle stonework around the arches, and the fix on Cleopatra.the.killing.44 wrote:cairns, why don't you try it on just a couple of the letters and post it? I think if done properly (and not in less than 5 minutes) it could look nice, and you're certainly capable of that
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Stonework i agree.Incandenza wrote:I kinda like the stonework... and since we're talking about the title, at some point while my back was turned it seemed to get awful bright... the "Julio-Claudian family" bit is so bright as to appear blurry, and I'm not wild about the bright orange in "poison rome" either... just seems to bright for a map that's mostly pretty subtle colors.

Gold and flames? Madness, it should be about white marble and purple togas and laurel wreathes and subtle poisonings. The name itself implies a deeper game being played within the Family than that of pyrotechnics and shiny metals.cairnswk wrote:Stonework i agree.Incandenza wrote:I kinda like the stonework... and since we're talking about the title, at some point while my back was turned it seemed to get awful bright... the "Julio-Claudian family" bit is so bright as to appear blurry, and I'm not wild about the bright orange in "poison rome" either... just seems to bright for a map that's mostly pretty subtle colors.
The title, please discuss with Gimil...he seems to have grand ideas that this map should be all about gold and flames....
Agreed, that's why i had purple statues (probably a little misplaces), marble (white/grey) statues, leaurels wreaths (which already exist), and the few flames for Nero burning Rome.Incandenza wrote:....
Gold and flames? Madness, it should be about white marble and purple togas and laurel wreathes and subtle poisonings. The name itself implies a deeper game being played within the Family than that of pyrotechnics and shiny metals.

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Sorry to continuously bring this back up, but this is the only thing that I can still see that needs fixing with the graphics.cairnswk wrote:Yeh Neon Peon....that cleopatra connection was because of the bevelling...and i didn't notice it.The Neon Peon wrote:Once again, the Cleopatra-Marcus Atonius connection has uneven shaking and is not even (the lower part extends farther left than the upper part.)![]()
Thanks, and it is fixed as i ahve changed the bevelling on her tert there.
What do you mean stroke? Are you referring to: the fill, the outline, or the emboss?the.killing.44 wrote:I like the title but I say get rid of stroke on "The Julio-Claudian Family" — it makes it hard to read. Also I would think about making the |'s between the arches 1.5ish x as thick.
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The Cleopatra graphic connection is fixed. It is as good as it's going to get.The Neon Peon wrote:Sorry to continuously bring this back up, but this is the only thing that I can still see that needs fixing with the graphics.cairnswk wrote:Yeh Neon Peon....that cleopatra connection was because of the bevelling...and i didn't notice it.The Neon Peon wrote:Once again, the Cleopatra-Marcus Atonius connection has uneven shaking and is not even (the lower part extends farther left than the upper part.)![]()
Thanks, and it is fixed as i ahve changed the bevelling on her tert there.
Done.Gameplay stuff...
Agrippina-Germanicus bonus has 8 territories in it, yet it is only worth 4 troops. Seems like it should be 5. (PS, Nero Caesar connection has a little rectangle at the end that should not be there.)
Livia Drusilla-Tibernius C. Nero bonus has 4 territories, so it should be worth 2 troops, not 1. Same with Gaius Octavius and Atia Caesonia family.

Stroke = outline. And no worries about the arches … they're fine as is.cairnswk wrote:What do you mean stroke? Are you referring to: the fill, the outline, or the emboss?the.killing.44 wrote:I like the title but I say get rid of stroke on "The Julio-Claudian Family" — it makes it hard to read. Also I would think about making the |'s between the arches 1.5ish x as thick.
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Arches. I think they are fine, and if i make them thicker i'll have to move everything, and that isn't worth the effort.
I think the font is perfect...Times New Roman. At size 30 it allows the fill to work well.InkL0sed wrote:I don't like the actual text of the title either, actually. I agree it does look blurry, and the glow doesn't look good either.
I say you should maybe try a different font, but above all try to minimize the effects on the letters.


Yeh. look. i can't reduce the outline to thinner than 1px. so i'll have to remove it altogether, and i have put a yellow slight drop shadow behind it.the.killing.44 wrote:It's still blurry, but I don't think the problem is actual blur — it's the fact that your stroke (outline) around that text is hitting into the stroke of other letters, which smears the outline into being a bit hard to read and, tbh, a bit messy.
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Seconded (and thanks for the sig!)Incandenza wrote:That's a damn nice title right there.
I would've been disappointed if someone hadn't used that as a sig, so I'm obliged to ya.the.killing.44 wrote:Seconded (and thanks for the sig!)Incandenza wrote:That's a damn nice title right there.
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here i am!cairnswk wrote:Awaiting incanton now to stamp this, where is he?